Every story can be made stronger.

Here's the problem with us authors: we're too close to our own work. We can't possibly look at it with fresh eyes or in an unbiased way. Getting a critique from an experienced author is crucial to a book's success.

How does this sound? Readers staying up until 3 AM to finish your book, thinking about your characters long after they've finished, wishing they could live in your world. Isn't that every author's dream?

I can help you get there!

Get a FREE first page critique!

Here's what you'll get with your story critique:

In-story suggestions

I'll read your work from beginning to end, looking for how your plot, character, and setting can be strengthened, and also noting what's working well.

Final thoughts/comments

At the end of your critique, I'll sum up the key points that will make your book something readers can't put down.

Brainstorming

A chance for you to ask me anything and clarify my comments so we can strengthen your story-telling.

I want my FREE first page critique!

Over a decade of critiquing experience. Multi award-winning author.
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Get your story critiqued by an expert for $.008/word.

Optional: add a 1 hour live brainstorming session for a flat fee of $40.

"Jessica knows fantasy very well and was able to give lots of insights and perspective from a reader and publisher standpoint. I know that when I asked her to be my developmental editor that she brought years of knowledge and experience to the table. I can't wait to work with her on my future stories."

- Madelyn Smith, author

"Jessica is great at asking the questions that make character arcs stronger and story stakes more clear. And when you've nailed something, her enthusiasm comes through loud and clear!"

- Patrice Hale, author

"Jessica has an eye for pacing and plot structure. She can craft a story in a way that keeps readers engaged and she has used her expertise to improve my own stories and writing. Jessica is clear and concise with her advice and is a fantastic guide to taking stories to the next level."

- Tracy Daley, author

"Jessica's critiques have been strengthening my work for years."

- Valerie Doll, author

"Jessica gave me great feedback on how to improve my story but also gave me the inspiration to keep going with my story. She gives good balanced feedback and I cannot wait to give her more stories of mine to edit."

- Tim Costello of Tim Writes Today

"Jessica Flory has a unique talent."

- Readers' Favorite on Jessica Flory's writing